Thursday, September 11, 2008

My attempt at Paraphrasing

The Twenties, a time where classical music was rarely listened to and jazz was ringing in the ears of everyone throughout America. A time where drinking was illegal much like speeding is illegal today, everyone knew it was illegal but that stopped nobody. A time where Police had as much power against organized crime as a young child would. While all this was going on the stars of Jazz were becoming legends in the minds of Americans. The Twenties , a time where America began breaking away from the past , and building its future.

1 comment:

Eunice said...

Well, you certainly used your own words, but..... astronauts? Astronauts did not land on the moon until the late 60s????? Other than that, some creative styling, but too many fragments in a row makes them lose their effect...